Poem: A Mind In Limbo
I see your anguish and i hear your pain.
Both in your eyes and on your voice.
Its has changed you completely.
To someone who wants to hide.
You listen to woman who gave bad advice.
Believing their tales and stories.
But the doctor has cleared you of all ill’s.
Trying to help set your mind at ease.
But this disease has got such a grip.
You do not believe that the truth is right.
Believing the lies which are doing you harm.
It has eased a little but there’s a long road ahead.
Many bumps, corners and hurdles to come.
So with more help and pretence and also trust.
We will get you back to what you once were.
The struggle you have goes on and on.
But i’m here as always with you to help.
So we will work at it with hope until the day.
That you get better and back to normal again.
Then you can start all over once more.
Enjoying the things, you took for granted.
Very Nice Harry
DarkJade-
Thank you Darkjade.
Great compassion in your words, Harry.
Paul, its from the heart and meant as you can tell.
That’s a lovely poem. Very kind and compassionate.
Thank you , that’s what i tried to get into the poem.
Well done Harry!
Marcia i think i’m getting better, must go back to my usual poems 🙂
Dude, that’s great stuff, I’m impressed!! Nice work.
Steve thank you very much, my best yet i think.
Written with much feeling Harry, well done! Was it written with someone in mind? Just curious.
Barb, the feeling is there and you are right, its all about my wife.
I could tell it was someone near and dear – well done Harry, it was full of feeling and it came through!
Very nice, Harry.
Maiya, thanks i’m glad you liked it.
A very, very good poem Harry.
Written from the heart methinks. All the best poems come from there.
David
David thanks for your comment. From the heart indeed.
So do you think i’ll ever make it as a poet 😆
Harry that is one lovely poem…heartfelt/beautiful
Thank you JO, i’m getting better, do you think i’ll become a poet 🙂
Methinks you already are Harry.
🙂
Excellent Harry!
Abba :o]
Thank you very much Abba, i read your post about petitions, i go to them all the time to sign. And i’m going to start one very soon myself 🙂
Thanks JO.
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What a lovely poem you wrote about your wife, she’s a lucky lady 🙂
Thanks Marcia it was hard to get right.
A supportive and moving poem, Harry. Thank you, I really love this one!
Betty, thank you kindly, do you think i will become a poet some day, or should i stick to my usual poems 🙂
You already ARE a poet, Harry!! 🙂
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